中考書面表達解題技巧和專項訓練18
中考寫作主要考查學生能否比較得體的表述個人的見解和想法，是否具有清晰地描述事物和過程的能力。近年來，它以考生熟悉的生活題材為主，給考生一定的思維空間，只有掌握它的解題技巧，才能做到有的放矢，有備無患。
1.寫作前要做好“兩備”。捕捉信息，包括材料提示，寫作要求、文體和詞數等；列好提綱，把所寫的內容理清思路，列成若干條，選好要用的人稱、時態和詞語。
2.寫作中要做到“三要”。書寫要規范認真；句子要多用熟悉的、符合英文習俗；不熟悉的詞語要用同（近）義句替換。
3.寫完后要做到“四查”。查內容是否符合題意、查句子是否流暢通順、查語法是否有錯誤（包括時態、語態、單詞拼寫、大小寫和標點等）、查詞數是否符合要求。
【個案分析】假設你叫李磊，請你針對這封信的內容，給這位父親寫封回信，談談你的看法。要求：條例清楚，語義連貫，句式規范，字跡工整。詞數80左右。
dear editor,
i'm sorry to trouble you. i have a daughter. she is 13 years old. she likes making telephone calls. as soon as he gets back from school, she picks up the telephone and calls her classmates. she talks and talks, sometimes for 2 or 3 hours. we can't use it. i tell him not to do it, but she is unhappy. what should i do?
a worried father
【步步點撥】
1、 本文主要談如何糾正孩子愛打電話的問題，屬于學生比較熟悉的話題。
2、 本文的格式是書信。特別要求學生注意稱呼、正文、結束語和署名。
3、 問題的解決可從內因和外因兩個方面出發。內因可以從學生的天職是學習去談；外因可以去找老師，找同學的家長幫忙，也可以為她安裝上部電話，讓她付話費。
4、 本文屬于論述文，要求在文章中有明確的觀點，并用事例論證。
【例文品讀】
dear sir,
don't worry. you can have a word with her and tell her what to do. as a student, she must put her heart into the study. making telephones too much is bad for her study. if she goes on doing it, you can tell it to her teachers. i think they can help you.
you can also find out whom your daughter calls up. you may ask their parents for help.
you may buy a telephone for her. she can make telephone calls with her own telephone, but she must pay for it by herself.
yours,
li lei
lin ping
書面表達專項訓練
（一）記敘文
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dear …, thank you for your love
提示：在你的成長過程中，得到了家人、老師及朋友的關愛，你一定對他們心存感激。請你補全題目（如：dear mum, thank you for your love），用英語寫一篇短文，敘述他們所做的一件令你深深感動的事情，并表達你的感激之情。