Chinese Professional Letter Writing

dear leaders:
    hello!
    i am a chinese professional university ninety-seven fresh graduates. into the cause of education has always been my dream, years of the university of uplifting dream for me to lay a solid foundation of professional expertise made me clear career goal: to be a high school language teachers.
    heard so much about your school is an important base for training qualified personnel, teachers, show the growth only in the fertile soil, importance of education, emphasis on capacity, up and down and unite as one, a solid educational foundation, which, i am yang curtain. now i put a real form of written submissions presented to you, hope your school give me a chance to display their talent, to contribute to your school glory, but also educating people round my dream.
    select the education, the university chose , dead poets yu tao li will be engraved in the heart of the faith. entering college, i seize every day of the accumulation of knowledge and professional training of teaching basic skills, enrich their own minds. was high for the division, the body is the norm. as college students, i am thinking positive for progress, optimism, on the cardinal remain sober-minded, not afraid of difficulties prosperity, confidence, a sense of responsibility. in the capacity-building, the school actively participated in various activities, school wide attempt repeated teaching practice, both have learned into practice, but also exercise capacity.
    mirs wings, speeding horse needs to have their own world. your school of scientific management system and the concept of informed person ; so i firmly believe that your school work is my wise choice.
    finally, i wish your school recruit more capable personnel, achieve better results!
sincerely,
salute

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