2018屆高考英語選修7 Unit 5頂尖復習教案
③the reasons lie in the following.④almost all the time is spent on lessons in chinese schools and students are made by parents to concentrate on their study even when they get back home.⑤thus there is little time left for their physical activities.
⑥in my opinion，both the education departments and parents are responsible to give the students more time for physical activities.⑦anyhow，knowledge can be learned not only from books but also through activities.
yours_sincerely，
li_hua
點評
本段是對圖表的分析：
(1)注意一些固定句式的運用，如it can be seen easily from the above chart that...。
(2)數據分析要準確。
第二段是對上述問題的分析，內容要言之有理。
第三段是從個人角度提出解決問題的建議。表述中“in my opinion，responsible，anyhow，not only...but also”等詞匯、句式的使用比較到位，為文章提升了檔次。
【類題嘗試】
假如你是高中三年級的學生李華，你在學校組織了一項“有煩惱向誰說”的調查活動。請用英語給校報編輯寫一封信，反映相關情況。內容包括：調查結果(如圖所示)、持相應想法的理由及你對調查結果的看法。
注意：1.信的開頭和結尾已經給出，但不計入總詞數；
2.詞數為100左右。
dear editor，
i am a senior three student.recently we have carried out a survey—“to whom do you go when in trouble？”the results are as follows.
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yours sincerely，
li hua
one possible version：
dear_editor，
i am a senior three student.recently we have carried out a survey—“to whom do you go when in trouble？”the results are as follows.
61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble，the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other.another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to.
they suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experience.nevertheless，there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all.they say that their troubles are none of others’ business，or they find it hard to get along with others.
it is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a survey example.however，some general comments can be made.it seems clear from the response that some students lack communication with others and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives.
yours sincerely，
li hua