2016屆高考英語(yǔ)選修6 Unit 3頂尖復(fù)習(xí)教案
1.nowadays, because of the fast pace of life, more and more people like eating fast food.
2.today, people are busy with their work, so they always eat some fast food.
3.in order to save time, many people like eating fast food.
4.because of the fast pace of life, people have to eat more fast food and have no time to take exercise.
二、主體
參考句式:
1.how can we keep fit?
2.what is the good way to keep fit?
3.we must pay attention to our health.
4.first we should ...and then we should ...
5.the most important thing is ...
6.it is good for us to...
為使各項(xiàng)內(nèi)容銜接自然,可以適當(dāng)添加過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)。如:
firstly, secondly, thirdly ...
on one hand ...on the other hand ...
when, while, as ...
but, however ...
because, so, as a result ...
三、結(jié)尾
參考句式:
1.in a word, we must eat healthily and take more exercise to keep fit.
2.in short, if we want to keep fit, we must have a good habit and do more physical exercise.
3.as is said above, the healthier we eat, the fitter we will be.
可用來(lái)表示總結(jié)的短語(yǔ):
in a word, in short, in conclusion, all in all等。
【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】
how to be healthy?
①today, with the fast pace of life and work, people like eating all kinds of fast food.besides, the convenient vehicles make people keep away from walking.②because of these,more and more people are confronted with the threat of subhealth, for example, some can’t sleep well, some are always feeling tired and so on.
③but how can we change these and keep fit?
④first, i think a healthy balanced diet is very important for everyone.less meat, fatty and fast food, more vegetables and enough fruit are good for our health.⑤only when we are in a hurry can we have some junk food, but not often.second,we should take enough exercise because exercise can keep us energetic all the time.
⑥in a word, the better we get into good eating habits and the more we take exercise, the healthier our bodies will be.
點(diǎn)評(píng):
①with介詞短語(yǔ)的使用增加了句子的靈活性。
②關(guān)聯(lián)詞使句子上下銜接自然。
③but領(lǐng)起下文,使文章自然過(guò)渡到作者要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。
④first,second序數(shù)詞的使用使文章清晰地表達(dá)出要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)。
⑤本句為以only開(kāi)頭的倒裝句。不同句式的使用顯示出深厚的語(yǔ)言功底,使文章增色不少。
⑥總結(jié)句的使用使文章首尾呼應(yīng),內(nèi)容充實(shí)圓滿。
【類題嘗試】
當(dāng)今,有些家長(zhǎng)選擇用金錢獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)孩子在學(xué)習(xí)上的進(jìn)步。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫篇短文。
1.分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因及危害(工作繁忙,溺愛(ài)孩子,不利于孩子成長(zhǎng)……);
2.你對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的看法。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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