2019屆高考英語選修7 Unit 3頂尖復(fù)習教案
para.1:提出問題:好心情的重要性。
para.2:分析問題:產(chǎn)生壞心情的原因。
para.3:解決問題:調(diào)整心情的方法。
三、注意事項
提綱作文雖然給出了寫作的要點,但要點非常簡略,因而還需要對要點進行豐富和拓展。
【范文點評】
turning a bad mood into a good one
①at the end of the last semester,i got a c in the english examination.②when i knew the result,i couldn’t hold back my tears.③my mood was terrible and i thought the world was coming to an end.④i feared to see my english teacher and i thought my classmates would laught at me.⑤my parents weren’t satisfied with me and maybe they would scold me.⑥so i even wanted to leave my school and family.
⑦but after a while,i found i was wrong for i came to realize “failure is the mother of success”.⑧what i should do was to find the reason why i got so bad a result.⑨and i thought this was a lesson to me and it helped me to find my shortcomings.⑩maybe it could help me to improve my english.⑪so my bad mood turned into a good one.
1.文章標題,不要遺漏
本段為造成心情不佳的事件以及造成的影響,具體如下:
(1)①言簡意賅地點明導(dǎo)致心情不佳的事件。
(2)②③為具體心情不佳的表現(xiàn)。
(3)④⑤為導(dǎo)致心情不佳的心理原因。
(4)⑥為心情不佳造成的影響——想離家(學校)出走。
(5)綜上所述,整個事件的敘述娓娓道來,語意連貫,步步深入。
2.本段為“我的心情是如何由壞變好的”。具體過程如下:
意識到“失敗是成功之母”——自我反省——吸取教訓——提升英語——心情變好。
3.本文作者心情由壞變好的原因就是“自我反思,不放棄,繼續(xù)努力”。當然也可以借助外力,如老師、父母的教導(dǎo),書中的某一句話等都可以成為心情變好的原因。
【類題嘗試】
(XX年山東濰坊質(zhì)檢)假如你是李華,你們學校最近開展了創(chuàng)建“平安校園”的活動。你們班為此組織主題班會,請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,談一談你對如何創(chuàng)建“平安校園”的一些想法。短文應(yīng)該包括下面的內(nèi)容:
1.安全意識的重要性;
2.在運動中要注意安全;
3.在校內(nèi)要注意人身安全;
4.同學間發(fā)生矛盾時,一定要保持冷靜、理智;
5.逐步將“平安校園”活動轉(zhuǎn)化為全體師生的實際行動。
注意:
1.不要逐句翻譯,可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫;
2.詞數(shù):120左右;
3.文章開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:校園安全safety at school
my dear classmates,
there is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life.recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on.
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one possible version:
my_dear_classmates,
there_is_no_denying_that_safety_plays_an_important_part_in_our_daily_life.recently_our_school_has_carried_out_a_program_aimed_at_making_our_campus_a_safe_place_to_stay_on.