2020屆高考英語選修6 Unit 5頂尖復習教案
2.過渡詞
altogether總之;above all 最重要的是;however然而
【范文點評】
the future life
①with science and technology developing fast, it is certain that the future life will be more convenient and fastpaced.in the future we will have more free time and we may change jobs several times in our career.
②more people will be able to work at home, doing less manual work but more learning and thinking, which will make our brains bigger and bodies smaller.③besides, transportation will become cleaner, faster, cheaper and not so crowded.④there will be no need to worry about the environment being polluted while traveling, for new fuels and engines will be used.
at that time,⑤people will be using the internet to shop and do business while stores will be more like entertainment parks.⑥people will live in green houses and keep in touch with each other by using advanced videophones which can also be used for shopping and banking.
⑦altogether, compared to the life we live today,the future life will be totally different. ⑧however, no matter what happens in the future, as long as we learn to accept change and appreciate what is new and different,we will be well prepared for whatever the future may have in store and enjoy a happier and healthier life.
點評:
①由復合結構“with+賓語+賓語補足語”引出話題,自然流暢。
②此句準確得體地運用了非謂語動詞作狀語和非限制性定語從句。
③使用過渡詞besides,把話題自然引到“交通方式的變化”上。
④準確使用there is no need to do...句型,且多處使用非謂語動詞,如:to worry,being polluted,traveling。
⑤使用while來銜接兩個不同的未來變化;前一個分句用將來進行時使舉例時語言更生動形象。
⑥by引導的方式狀語中包含有一個定語從句。
⑦用altogether引出對上面兩段的猜想的總結。
⑧由轉折詞however銜接兩個句子,使句意互相照應,文章連貫流暢。
【類題嘗試】
自1978年以來,我國海外留學生回國人數逐年上升。請在shanghai daily上發表一篇文章,根據圖表敘述海外人員歸國情況,分析回歸原因,并希望更多的海外學者回國創業。
要求:1.可根據內容要點適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
2.詞數150左右,短文開頭已寫好,不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯:制定政策—work out policies,海歸人員—returnee
there has been a reversal of the braindrain since 1978 across the country.___________________________________
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one possible version:
there has been a reversal of the braindrain since 1978 across the country.between 1978 and , about 7,000 overseas chinese returned to shanghai after completing their studies abroad.they accounted for about 25% of all returnees nationwide.the year has witnessed a boom.the number of returnees came up to 15,000.by the end of , a further 22,000 have returned to this city.