2016屆中考英語寫作考點備考復習
2. accuracy (準確性: 語法準確,用詞精當)
3. fluency (流暢性: 層次清晰,行文連貫)
4. conciseness & variety (簡潔、多樣性: 語言簡潔,不重復)
5. ideological content (思想性: 文章立意高,表達個人觀點內容積極向上)
第三板塊:推陳出新
專題一:寫景
要點提示:
1)景物描寫既要追求獨特性,也要注意其思想內涵,切忌為寫景而寫景。
2)時態的把握主要是:栩栩如生型 以現在為核心,時態以一般現在時和現在完成時為主;往事再現型 以過去為核心,時態以一般過去時和過去進行時為主。
3)風景描寫或場景描寫的最后都可以議論或抒情。
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第四板塊:通觀全局
1.閱讀:她用愛創造奇跡
an eight-year-old child heard her parents talking about her little brother. all she knew was that he was very sick and they had no money. only a very expensive operation could save him now and there was no one to lend them the money.
when she heard her daddy say to her tearful mother, “only a miracle can save him now,” the little girl went to her bedroom and pulled her money from its hiding place and counted it carefully.
she hurried to a drugstore (藥店) with the money in her hand.
“and what do you want?” asked the salesman. “it’s for my little brother,” the girl answered. “he’s really, really sick and i want to buy a miracle.” “pardon?” said the salesman.
“my brother andrew has something bad growing inside his head and my daddy says only a miracle can save him. so how much does a miracle cost?” “we don’t sell a miracle here, child. i’m sorry,” the salesman said with a smile.