2022屆中考英語書面表達總復習教案
we students don't have jobs to earn money but depend on our parents, when we need some money, it's always a better choice to ask our parents for help instead of turn to our friends. meanwhile, we should be honest to our parents. （我們學生沒有工作，不掙錢，需要依賴我們的父母。當我們需要用錢的時候，問父母要總比問同學借要好。同時，我們應該對父母要保持誠實）
2. 邏輯
如果考生能夠找全題目要點，并且按照要點所給順序寫下來，結構清晰，那么邏輯應該是通順的。因為全文基本是按照如下思路：現身說法，對于對方所遇到的問題表示理解 --- 提出建議 --- 說明感受，即說明所提建議的原因。其中，可以使用大量的邏輯連詞和狀語從句表示因果、條件、轉折等邏輯關系。
3. 語法、亮點
根據題目要求，回信文體形式大體為說明文，議論參半，所以下筆前首先確定文章時態大體為一般現在時態。由于文章話題屬于生活化細節問題，所以文章內容一般不涉及難度過大的詞或句子，只要句式靈活多變，用詞準確、豐富，邏輯通順，語法完全正確，多用詞組，向批卷老師呈現出扎實的語法功底和豐富的詞匯量，也就是文章的亮點所在。
one possible version:
hi! alice,
i’m glad to hear from you.
yes, i sometimes have the same problem.
i think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. you don’t need to worry too much. she’ll probably pay you back when she has money. if you don’t lend her the money, i’m afraid you may lose the friend.
i think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. so when my friends need money, i will try my best to help them. maybe i’ll get it back, or maybe i won’t.
i hope what i said can help you.
yours, liu ming 【上海】ix writing(作文) 共18分
106. write at least 60 words about the topic “i’m member of _____.”
(以”我是``````的一員”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文,標點符合不占格子”)
提示:你可以作為任意興趣小組或者社團的人員,或者作為家庭,班級,社區額的一員,寫出你的經歷,感受等.
use the following points as a reference.
are you glad to be a member of ``````?
what do you do in it?
how do you feel as such a member?
【寫作思路】
一、審題
本文要求寫一篇介紹自己作為某興趣小組或某社團成員的文章，要求學生寫出自己的經歷以及感受等。
二、列舉寫作要點
1. have been a member of singing and dancing club for +時間；
2. i’m an actor in the this club.
3. though i am very tired, i like to sing and dance every day.
三、列出關鍵短語和句型
be a member of , an actor, singing and dacing, feel very happy,
【范文】
a possible version：
i’m a member of the singing and dancing club