2020屆高考英語必修5 Unit 3復習教案
寫人的記敘文當然離不開記事，但兩者的側重點有所不同。記人者，以人為主導，所寫的事都是為襯托人物服務的，所以，記述時，外貌的描寫、性格的刻畫等等，都要服務于人物，不可喧賓奪主、本末倒置。
【寫作示例】
請根據下面所提供的資料，寫一篇介紹潘瑋柏(will pan)的英語短文。
潘瑋柏，當今著名歌手，英俊瀟灑，身高1.74米，1980年8月6日在上海出生。會漢語和英語兩種語言。他喜歡籃球，最喜歡的音樂是hip hop、r&b和華語流行音樂(chinese pop music)。他為人隨和、活潑好動、笑容燦爛。他的愿望就是能夠成為“super idol”(超級偶像)。
注意：1.可根據內容要點適當增加細節以使行文連貫；
2.詞數：120左右。
【寫作要領】
一、審題要點
1.體裁：記敘文；
2.時態：一般現在時；
3.人稱：第三人稱。
二、內容要點
1.潘瑋柏的概況描述；
2.他的業余愛好及性情；
3.他的愿望。
【金點模板】
一、開頭
參考句式：
1.will pan, who was born on...，is a...
2.will pan, one of the...，was born...
3.born on...，will pan is a...
4.will pan was born...and he is one of the...
二、主體
參考句式：
1.he can speak...as well as...
2.he can not only...but also...
3.he likes...most and dislikes...
4.he is fond of...and...
5.everyone likes him very much.
6.he is very popular among young men.
為使各項內容銜接自然，可以適當添加過渡詞。如：
as well as；not only...but also... ；though；although... ；however；but...
三、結尾
參考句式：
1.wish he will succeed!
2.wish his dream come true!
3.good luck to him!
4.wish him a fantastic future!
【范文點評】
will pan
①will pan, one of the most famous pop stars now in china, was born on august 6, 1980 in shanghai.he is about 1.74 meters tall and is a handsome young man.
②will pan can speak english as well as chinese.his most favorite songs are hip hop, r & b, and the chinese pop music and he himself sings many good songs of this kind.during his free time, he is fond of taking part in sports, and his favorite sport is basketball.③though he is famous, he is easy to get along with.he is lovely and actively.④he always wears a big smile on his face, so more and more young men and women become his fans.
pan has many wishes.⑤ to become a super idol becomes the biggest one of them.
⑥wish his dream come true!
點評：
①one of the most...作will pan的同位語使句子靈活。
②as well as用得好，也可用not only...but also...。
③轉折詞使用得當。
④wear a big smile表示帶著微笑，使句子增色很多。
⑤用動詞不定式作主語避免了文章句式的單調。
⑥加上祝愿語使得文章活潑生動。
【類題嘗試】
請用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文，介紹一下該人物，要求根據所給信息作適當發揮，且須包括以下三部分內容：
1.對該人物的簡單介紹；
2.喜歡該人物的理由；
3.從該人物身上得到的啟示。