如何寫出中考英語高分作文

　　英語寫作是學生學習的一個盲點，缺乏對寫作的專門訓練和反思，老師的工作量大，造成作文講評大多數時候只談現象，因此學生學得也不具體、不深入，忽略寫作技能的提高，甚至誤認為只要句子結構正確，無單詞拼寫錯誤就應該得滿分。同學們應該走出對英語寫作認識上的誤區。那么怎樣才能寫出一篇優秀作文，而在中考中獲取高分呢？
 
　　一、寫作訣竅
　　總體把握，要點齊全；人稱時態，邏輯清楚；
　　關鍵詞匯，動詞第一；組詞成句，結構完整；
　　組句成文，連詞增色；此路不通，繞道迂回；
　　字跡工整，留好印象；從句適量，高分有望。
 
　　二、寫作步驟
　　1. 認真審題。審題包括要點、格式、詞數以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息，告誡讀者什么(即寫作目的)。
　　2. 確定文體和時態。確定文體后，根據不同文體的特點和要求進行組織材料；同時確定出該篇文章的總時態與時態的變化。
　　3. 寫完要點，但不隨意發揮。
　　4. 先草稿，后抄寫。
 
　　三、習作點評
　　[XX年全國中學生英語能力競賽初賽初三組] (14分)
　　choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.
　　﹒what exactly your hobby is;
　　﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby;
　　﹒why you enjoy your hobby;
　　﹒about your hopes and plans for the future.
 
　　寫作要求：
　　1. 根據所提供的內容，適當拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的信息體現在文章中。
　　2. 條理清楚，語句通順，書寫清晰、規范。
　　3. 詞數60-80。
 
　　[學生習作a]
　　my hobby is read books. when i was seven years old .
　　i became interested in reading books. i like needing books
　　because there are a lot of useful things in books. i can learn
　　a lot of knowledge from books. books also can teach me
　　how to be a good person . books even can solve many
　　problems for me . i will read more good books to improve
　　myself.
　　①改為reading books，動詞作表語時應該用動名詞。
　　②also的位置應放在can之后。
　　[點評]：檔次9-11分。
　　①要點不全，漏掉最后一個要點。
　　②句子基本無誤，能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢，句子與句子之間過渡不自然，給讀者感覺在回答上述① ② ③問題。
　　③有少量錯誤。
 
　　[學生習作b]
　　my hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable .
　　when i was young, my mother used to tell me a story before
　　i went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting
　　that i always felt they weren’t enough . so i began to read
　　books by myself .little by little i became interested in
　　reading . i can learn much knowledge and many interesting
　　things all over the world .when i read books , i can enjoy the
　　beautiful sentences . at the same time i can improve my