unit 3 The world online單元復習學案
二、謀篇
1.首先：分析數據
學生每天花在體育活動上的時間：
美國：72分鐘；韓國：42分鐘；中國：12分鐘
2.然后：分析原因
(1)在學校里大部分時間都花在學習上。
(2)回家后父母也讓學生學習。
3.最后：提出措施
教育部門和父母都要意識到體育活動的重要性，給孩子們更多的時間去參與體育活動。
【范文點評】
dear_editor，
①it can be seen easily from the above chart that american students spend 72 minutes on physical activities per day，and those in south korea 42 minutes.②however，chinese students have only 12 minutes for physical activities per day.
③the reasons lie in the following.④almost all the time is spent on lessons in chinese schools and students are made by parents to concentrate on their study even when they get back home.⑤thus there is little time left for their physical activities.
⑥in my opinion，both the education departments and parents are responsible to give the students more time for physical activities.⑦anyhow，knowledge can be learned not only from books but also through activities.
yours_sincerely，
li_hua
點評：
本段是對圖表的分析：
(1)注意一些固定句式的運用，如it can be seen easily from the above chart that...。
(2)數據分析要準確。
本段是對上述問題的分析，內容要言之有理。
本段是從個人角度提出解決問題的建議。表述中“in my opinion，responsible，anyhow，not only...but also”等詞匯、句式的使用比較到位，為文章提升了檔次。
【類題嘗試】
假如你是高中三年級的學生李華，你在學校組織了一項“有煩惱向誰說”的調查活動。請用英語給校報編輯寫一封信，反映相關情況。內容包括：調查結果(如圖所示)、持相應想法的理由及你對調查結果的看法。
注意：1.信的開頭和結尾已經給出，但不計入總詞數；
2.詞數為100左右。
dear editor，
i am a senior three student.recently we have carried out a survey——“to whom do you go when in trouble？”the results are as follows.
________________________________________________________________________
yours sincerely，
li hua
one possible version：
dear_editor，
i_am_a_senior_three_student.recently_we_have_carried_out_a_survey——“to_whom_do_you_go_when_in_trouble？”the_results_are_as_follows.
61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble，the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better
understanding of each other.another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to.they suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experience.nevertheless，there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all.they say that their troubles are none of others’ business，or they find it hard to get along with others.