Unit 3 Science versus nature單元復習學案
now i’d like to introduce myself to you.my name is li ping.i’m a young man of 30, 180 cm tall and healthy.in my spare time i enjoy swimming, dancing and singing.
③after graduation from beijing normal university in as one of the most excellent students, i went to work as an english teacher in nantong high school for three years.since , i’ve been working in suzhou high school.
④during my teaching career, i have made a lot of friends in various fields and developed profound friendship with each other.i’m proficient in english and i’ve translated many chinese books into english.⑤my spoken english is especially good and my foreign friends often praise me for my accent.
⑥i do hope that my qualifications and experiences meet your demands.if so, please write a letter to me or phone me.i live at no.1 renmin road, suzhou city.my phone number is 05128765432.
⑦i am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
yours truly,
li ping
點評:
①i learned from the newspaper交代信息來源。
②dream of doing sth.用得恰到好處,表明求職的誠意。
③該處as one of the most excellent students突出自己的優勢;after引出時間狀語,使句式更多樣化。
④介紹個人工作經歷,并根據所申請工作的特點,突出自己善于交際的能力。
⑤通過適當地添加細節,說明自己擅長英語口語。
⑥用助動詞do表強調,充分表現出想得到這份工作的急迫心情。
⑦以書信中的常用句式收尾,規范得體。
【類題嘗試】
閱讀下面一則廣告,按要求完成寫作任務。
假設你是李華,這則廣告引起了你的興趣,請用英文寫一封自薦信。要點如下:
1.對夏令營主題的理解;
2.根據招聘要求自我介紹;
3.參加夏令營的目的。
注意:1.信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數;
2.詞數100左右。
dear sir,
i’m li hua from fujian.________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
i am looking forward to your early reply.
sincerely yours,
li hua
one possible version:
dear sir,
i’m li hua from fujian.when i was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly.i think it instructive to learn to live together by living together.it is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together.therefore i recommend myself to you without hesitation.
as a boy of 17, i am outgoing, good at english and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12.i think it is a kind of winwin activity.for one thing, i can help take care of the children.for another thing, i can improve my english, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.
i am looking forward to your early reply.
sincerely yours,
li hua