2019屆高三英語Poems教案
warm feelings rush through my soul. i suddenly found the sun shining again when i stepped out of his office.
with the teacher's help, i eventually got over my depression. from then on, i no longer bowed my head but began smiling to my classmates. i would put up my hand confidently in class and kid with my new friends in my spare time. meanwhile, i was gradually embraced by my classmates.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1.以約30個(gè)詞概括短文內(nèi)容。
2.然后以約120個(gè)詞就“老師對(duì)學(xué)生人生的影響”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法,并包括下面要點(diǎn)。
1)你對(duì)好的老師和不好的老師對(duì)學(xué)生的人生影響有何感想。
2)以你的生活經(jīng)歷為例,說明老師對(duì)你成長(zhǎng)的影響。
[寫作要求]
1.作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。標(biāo)題自定。
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫。
[寫作輔導(dǎo)]
1.寫作有可能用到的主要短語和單詞:鼓勵(lì)encouragement,鼓勵(lì)某人做某事encourage sb to do sth, 學(xué)會(huì)自強(qiáng)learn to be independent, 自信confidence/confident,成功succeed/success,情感低谷be upset,勇敢面對(duì)生活中的痛苦face bravely pains in life.
2.本文的概要必須包含以下要點(diǎn):the student was upset / his teacher told him about his own attitude towards life/his teacher encouraged him to face bravely pains and gains in life.
3.本文要注意,概要一定要根據(jù)文段的時(shí)態(tài)來寫。同時(shí),絕對(duì)不能抄襲原文的句子。作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事時(shí),一般使用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)較為常見。而結(jié)論性的觀點(diǎn)應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。
i will never forget my teacher
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答案:
i will never forget my teacher
when the student was upset, the teacher told him about his own attitude towards life and encouraged him to face bravely pains and gains in life, which helped him finally defeat his depression.
teachers play an important role in us students' growth. we can't grow up well without our teachers. a good teacher can help his students out to great successes. he can also encourage his students to be brave when they are upset and in trouble. what is more, a good teacher can make you independent and confident. i will never forget my english teacher, mr. li, who never looked me as a stupid student; he always gave a lot of encouragement and kind help, which led to my good command of english.
teachers' love is unforgettable. their kind help will be of great benefit to us forever.