高一人教版必修1英語全冊教學案及答案2

  [寫作內容]
    你的英語老師在上英語寫作課時，要求同學們根據老師提供的英語新聞報道，談談對四川汶川地震的一些人與事的感想。請你以“greatest love is unselfish”為題，準備一篇發言稿，內容包括以下內容：
    1.以約30個詞概括這篇新聞報道；
    2.以約120個詞，請就“大愛無私”的話題寫一篇英語短文，表達你內心的感受，并包括如下要點：
    1)你看完這個故事后，你如何評價這位老師的無私行為；為什么?
    2)你的感想。
[寫作要求]
    1.作文中可使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；標題自定。
    2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
  [評分標準]概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。
  [寫作輔導]
    1.寫作有可能用到的主要短語和單詞：自然災害natural disasters，保護 protect/protection，奉獻某a的生命devote one' s life to doing sth,努力做某事make one' s efforts to do sth，救某生命save one ' s life.
    2.本文的概要必須包含以下要點：the rescue teamers made their efforts to rescue the victims buried in the ruins. they found four school kids were under a teacher's desk and the teacher placed himself to the side of the desk without boards, protecting his students from harm. / but the teacher chose to give the living chances to his lovely students.   
    3.本文要注意，概要一定要根據文段的時態來寫。同時，絕對不能抄襲原文的句子。文章是討論你看完這個故事后，你如何評價這位老師的無私行為以及你的想法，屬于是評論性文字和結論性的觀點，故用一般現在時或一般將來時態。
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[答案]
greatest love is unselfish
    during wenchuan earthquake in sichuan province, a rescue team found a teacher, dead for hours, and four school kids, safe with the protection of the teacher. and the teacher's greatest love gave everyone a great shock.
    a very ordinary teacher would rather give his life to save and protect his students, for he knew that he was a teacher and should protect his students, as we know, when the disaster broke out, all the teachers in this earthquake area made their efforts to help and save their students, and this noble act shows that greatest love is unselfish. facing natural disasters, sometimes we human beings may feel too weak, but just at this very moment, we will try everything to help others, even devote our lives to doing that.
    after reading the news story, i was moved to tears. greatest love is unselfish. the teacher's action illustrates our kind teachers' greatest love to their students.