Unit 3 The world of colours and light單元復習學案
一般說來,開放式作文,要求的字數比較少,所以我們在文章的結構上必須注意“集中火力”,突出重點,直奔主題,而不要隨便發揮。
這樣,完成了表述以后,就進入了修改階段。看語法結構,看語言表達,看單詞拼寫,看標點符號,甚至看字母的大小寫。總之,好文章都是經過反復修改而成的。
【寫作示例】
在競爭激烈的當今社會,人們十分強調個人能力,但是我們也不能忽視相互合作(cooperation)的重要性。請舉例說明相互合作的重要性。
要求:詞數120左右。
【寫作要領】
本題為開放式作文,要求舉例說明相互合作的重要性。首先應該闡明自己贊成合作的觀點,然后,舉例說明。舉例后的重點應該在于說明合作的重要性上。最后一段要進行總結,以達到前后的呼應。
【金點模板】
①people’s view on________.②in my opinion,________.
③just take________.④the success________.⑤so cooperation________.
⑥i doubt whether________.⑦no matter________.⑧at the same time,________.⑨so cooperation________.
⑩all in all,________.
【范文點評】
my view on cooperation
①people’s view on cooperation varies from individual to individual.in my opinion,cooperation to society is what air is to man.
②just take the nobel chemistry prize as an example.the success relies on the efforts of all the three scientists.③so cooperation plays a very important role in the fields of scientific research.
④i doubt whether personal efforts are enough to deal with the ever increasing challenges. ⑤no matter how great a person is, he or she cannot accomplish everything within his or her own strength. at the same time, everyone has their shortcomings. so cooperation is needed as far as the fact is concerned.
⑥all in all, as the saying goes “all roads lead to rome” i think all rightful attempts to succeed lead to the improvement of men’s living and working standard.
點評:
①開門見山,點明主題,提出個人觀點。
②舉例說明合作的重要性,富有說服力。
③據上例得出結論。
④進一步說明合作的重要性,闡明個人的能力再強大也需要合作。
⑤no matter引導的讓步狀語從句增強了感染力。
⑥最后給與總結,呼應開頭,前后得到了很好的照應。
【類題嘗試】
(XX年陜西寶雞教學質檢)誠信是處世之本。但是在中學生當中,考試作弊、抄襲作業、欺騙家長和老師等現象屢見不鮮。請你對以上種種現象作簡要描述,并以“how to guarantee honesty”為題,從三個方面談談如何保證學生做到誠信。
注意:1.詞數不少于100;
2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
how to guarantee honesty
as we all know,honesty is always an essential principle of living.much to our regret,however,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________honesty is the best policy,which is what we should keep in mind all the time.