2019屆高三英語英Healthy eating教案
2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
[評分標準]概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。
[寫作輔導]
1.寫作有可能用到的主要短語和單詞：撫養小孩raise one’s children，
2.本文的概要必須包含以下要點：the baby had been born without ears.--/"you're going to the hospital, son. mother and i have someone who will donate the ears you need. but it's a secret." said the father. / the operation was a brilliant success. / ... one of the darkest days that ever pass through a son. he stood with his father over his mother's casket (棺材). slowly and tenderly, the father stretched forth a hand and raised the thick, reddish-brown hair to let out the secret.
3.本文要注意，概要一定要根據文段的時態來寫。同時，絕對不能抄襲原文的句子。文章中要求你看完這個故事后，你如何評價這位母親的無私行為，屬于是評論性文字和結論性的觀點，故多用一般現在時或一般將來時態。而“請以你的日常生活經歷的事情為例，說明別人的善良行為”屬于經歷，故用一般過去時。后面對你的影響可以用一般現在時態去寫。
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答案：
help is always unselfish
an unselfish mother donated her ears to her imperfect son without telling him about it. at last, the son got the secret from his father after his mother died.
help is always unselfish. the mother donated her ears to her son, showing her greatest love to her child. from this, we can know how difficult it is for parents to raise their children.
in the daily life, we always get kind help from our teachers, classmates and friends. and their kind help is always unselfish. when i was in senior middle school, i lived in the school. every time when i was ill, my teachers and classmates gave me kind help, taking good care of me all the time. in today's society, i was affected by some bad things, which made me think that there was no kindness in the world. it was my friends who did everything to help me out.