2021屆高考英語基礎寫作范文
下午數學考試,你成績不佳,心情郁悶。晚上幾個好朋友邀你去歌唱廳(ktv)唱歌,你們一晚上唱得很盡興。你用日記的形式記錄下你今天的活動及感受。
1、下午的數學考試你的成績不佳,心情一直不好。
2、晚上同學邀請你去ktv唱歌,這是你第一次去ktv。
3、大家唱得很高興,而你一直當聽眾,你覺得你的歌唱得不好,不敢去唱。
4、在大家的鼓勵下,你終于拿起了麥克風(microphone),唱了一首英文歌 i believe i can fly。
[寫作要求]:
1、必須使用5個句子表達全部的內容。
2、 日記的開頭和結尾已寫好。
friday, nov. 2, sunny
this evening i went to the ktv with some of my friends.
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i have become cheerful now and above all i’ve regained self-confidence. i believe that the worst enemy in one’s life is oneself. i shouldn’t lose heart just because of one or two failures because i still have chances to try.
[評分標準] 句子結構的準確性和復雜度;信息內容的完整性和連貫性。
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one possible version:
friday, nov. 2, sunny
this evening i went to the ktv with some of my good friends.
this was the first time that i had been to a ktv and at first i didn’t want to go. i was in a bad mood the whole afternoon because i didn’t do well in math exam. at the ktv, everybody sang his favorite songs very happily except me – i was the only one of the audience. i didn’t dare to have a try because i was afraid that i couldn’t sing well. encouraged by my classmates, i picked up the microphone and sang an english song entitled i believe i can fly.
i have become cheerful now and above all i’ve regained self-confidence. i believe that the worst enemy in one’s life is oneself. i shouldn’t lose heart just because of one or two failures because i still have chances to try.
45. 基礎寫作(一篇日記 能與外國人交談感到很高興)
【寫作內容】
請根據下面內容要點,寫一篇日記。
10月11日星期天,天氣晴朗,上午十點,你在一家商店買東西,這時來了一位美國婦女。她要給丈夫買一件襯衫。由于售貨員不懂英語,他們都很著急。你了解了情況,幫助了他們。對此,美國婦女對你非常感謝。你對自己能與外國人交談感到很高興。