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hi, i am jane. i like the book named the story of my life by helen keller, which is the most influential book in my life. it is filled with courage, struggle and faith throughout. helen keller was once in deep despair in her childhood, but finally she decided to overcome her physical defects and live happily. furthermore, she showed great patience in her long and hard learning period. i have learned, above all, three lessons from her story. first, she taught me that often the road to success is to face hardships bravely. maybe you are born under a star yet you can stand a better chance than others. it is therefore important that you screw up your courage when courage is needed. second, the destruction of part of her senses did not prevent her from learning: on the contrary, she had made continual efforts to go deeper into the realm of knowledge, and her perseverance had thus helped her overcome many handicaps. third, she advised that we should make the most of our sense-organs as if we would lose them soon because in this way we would observe the world more carefully than ever before.
the book is inspiring in that it is one brimming over with the unbending will of a gallant woman set with seemingly insurmountable (adj.不可克服的) difficulties. i hope i can be as courageous as she.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
你的英語老師在上英語口語課時,要求同學(xué)們每人就“影響我一生的一本書”的話題進行討論,你參加討論。聽完jane的發(fā)言之后,請你以“the most influential book in my life”為題,準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括以下內(nèi)容:
1.以約30個詞概括jane的發(fā)言要點;
2.然后以約120個詞談?wù)動绊懩愕囊簧哪骋槐緯瑑?nèi)容包括:
1)這本書令你印象最深的是什么? 2)這本書如何影響你的人生? 3)你的感想。
[寫作要求]
1.作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;標(biāo)題自定。
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫。
[寫作輔導(dǎo)]
1.寫作有可能用到的主要短語和單詞:印象impression,影響affect/have influence on sth./have an effect on sth.
2.本文的概要必須包含以下要點:i like the book named the story of my life by helen keller,
which is the most influential book in my life./the book is inspiring.../it is filled with courage, struggle and faith throughout./i hope i can be as courageous as she.
3.本文要注意,概要一定要根據(jù)文段的時態(tài)來寫。同時,絕對不能抄襲原文的句子。文章是談?wù)動绊懩愕囊簧哪骋槐緯瑢儆谠u論性文字和結(jié)論性的觀點,故用一般現(xiàn)在時或一般將來時態(tài)較為合理。