Unit 1　Laughter is good for you單元復習學案

firstly, secondly, thirdly ...
on one hand ...on the other hand ...
when, while, as ...
but, however ...
because, so, as a result ...
三、結尾
參考句式：
1.in a word, we must eat healthily and take more exercise to keep fit.
2.in short, if we want to keep fit, we must have a good habit and do more physical exercise.
3.as is said above, the healthier we eat, the fitter we will be.
可用來表示總結的短語：
in a word, in short, in conclusion, all in all等。
【范文點評】
how to be healthy?
①today, with the fast pace of life and work, people like eating all kinds of fast food.besides, the convenient vehicles make people keep away from walking.
②because of these，more and more people are confronted with the threat of sub­health, for example, some can’t sleep well, some are always feeling tired and so on.
③but how can we change these and keep fit?
④first, i think a healthy balanced diet is very important for everyone.less meat, fatty and fast food, more vegetables and enough fruit are good for our health.
⑤only when we are in a hurry can we have some junk food, but not often.second，we should take enough exercise because exercise can keep us energetic all the time.
⑥in a word, the better we get into good eating habits and the more we take exercise, the healthier our bodies will be.
點評：
①with介詞短語的使用增加了句子的靈活性。
②關聯詞使句子上下銜接自然。
③but領起下文，使文章自然過渡到作者要表達的內容。
④first，second序數詞的使用使文章清晰地表達出要表達的觀點。
⑤本句為以only開頭的倒裝句。不同句式的使用顯示出深厚的語言功底，使文章增色不少。
⑥總結句的使用使文章首尾呼應，內容充實圓滿。
【類題嘗試】
當今，有些家長選擇用金錢獎勵孩子在學習上的進步。請根據以下提示用英語寫篇短文。
1.分析這種現象產生的原因及危害(工作繁忙，溺愛孩子，不利于孩子成長……)；
2.你對這種現象的看法。
注意：1.詞數100左右；
2.可根據內容適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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one possible version：
nowadays more and more parents choose to reward their children with money for the progress they have made in their studies.
why? most parents devote themselves to their careers due to fierce competition, thus caring less about their children.however, i don’ t think this is a practical and wise choice.firstly,
if children are always rewarded with money for high marks, their attention will be focused on money instead of the pleasure of studying.some of them will stop working hard as soon as they get what they want.secondly, too much money will spoil the children, for they are too young to use money properly.
i think a hug and a kiss will work better for children than money.money may do them more harm than good.