Unit 1 Getting along with others單元復習學案
2.will pan, one of the...,was born...
3.born on...,will pan is a...
4.will pan was born...and he is one of the...
二、主體
參考句式:
1.he can speak...as well as...
2.he can not only...but also...
3.he likes...most and dislikes...
4.he is fond of...and...
5.everyone likes him very much.
6.he is very popular among young men.
為使各項內容銜接自然,可以適當添加過渡詞。如:
as well as;not only...but also... ;though;although... ;however;but...
三、結尾
參考句式:
1.wish he will succeed!
2.wish his dream come true!
3.good luck to him!
4.wish him a fantastic future!
【范文點評】
will pan
①will pan, one of the most famous pop stars now in china, was born on august 6, 1980 in shanghai.he is about 1.74 meters tall and is a handsome young man.
②will pan can speak english as well as chinese.his most favorite songs are hip hop, r & b, and the chinese pop music and he himself sings many good songs of this kind.during his free time, he is fond of taking part in sports, and his favorite sport is basketball.
③though he is famous, he is easy to get along with.he is lovely and actively.④he always wears a big smile on his face, so more and more young men and women become his fans.
pan has many wishes.⑤ to become a super idol becomes the biggest one of them.
⑥wish his dream come true!
點評:
①one of the most...作will pan的同位語使句子靈活。
②as well as用得好,也可用not only...but also...。
③轉折詞使用得當。
④wear a big smile表示帶著微笑,使句子增色很多。
⑤用動詞不定式作主語避免了文章句式的單調。
⑥加上祝愿語使得文章活潑生動。
【類題嘗試】
請用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文,介紹一下該人物,要求根據所給信息作適當發揮,且須包括以下三部分內容:
1.對該人物的簡單介紹;
2.喜歡該人物的理由;
3.從該人物身上得到的啟示。
䦋㌌㏒㧀낈ᖺ琰茞ᓀ㵂ü thomas edison
inventor;
creative;diligent;
full of wisdom
“genius is one percent
inspiration and ninety¬nine
percent perspiration.”
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one possible version:
thomas edison
born in america, thomas edison was a great scientist and inventor.he was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating.in fact, he was a man full of imagination.
i admire edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world.he had more than 1,000 inventions.in his life time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the wizard of melo park”.he was also so diligent that he worked day and night. and this explained why he had so many great inventions.